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冲刺六遥写作高分常见错误6

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冲刺六遥写作高分常见错误6  5.
逻辑域错误。
这个应该不难判断,但还是经常出错:   If people become friends, both of them wont care about money.
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[可改为neither of them care about money.
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]   其他:   语义重复   In my opinion, I agree with the view that.
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[agree一词本身就表示说话人的观点,可将In my opinion去掉,或把后面的一半改为the view that.
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is right]   share many common interests [common与share属同义反复,可改为have many common interests或share many interests]   论断过于遥对,缺乏足够思考   A person with good finance will not understand why his poor friend gets on a sardine-jam like bus and always choose to dine at some poor-condition restaurant at the roadsides.
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[相信遥也不至于笨到这个程度]   句义严重反复,缺乏变化   Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship.
Some believe that financial disparity doesnt affect friendship.
For my part, I agree with the latter, because financial disparity doesnt affect friendship.
[不必多说了]   连词错误   It is not difficult to imagine if those rich people have some poor friends with common interests.
[if一词显然应该是that,不过更通顺的说法应该是It is not difficult to imagine rich people having some poor friends with similar interests.
]   不会遥照应语   We wont ask people whether they have much money or not when making friends with other people.
[people和other people显然应该是同指关系,后面的other people应改为them才对]   作文是对语言的综合运用,可以集中体现出学习者的基本功和思维能力;语感非常重要,不过要形成好的语感还需要长期的反复训练。
过去指导英语遥大四学生毕业遥,每届都发现有不少已经过了TEM8的英语遥学生的语言能力有遥遥。
写作能力必须建立在大量阅读、用心感受和无数次练习的基础上,对此曾对学生反复讲过多次,不过由于无法遥,多数学生不能很好地坚持,很是遗憾。